写作《我的故乡英语作文》小技巧请记住这五点。（精选5篇）

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写作核心提示：

写一篇关于故乡的英语作文，可以让你更深入地思考这个地方对你的意义。以下是一些需要注意的事项，以及一个写作结构建议：
"写作注意事项 (Key Points to Note):"
1. "明确主题 (Clear Theme):" 你的作文核心是什么？是描述故乡的景色和声音？是回忆与家人朋友共度的时光？是表达你对故乡的深厚感情？还是讨论故乡的变化以及它如何影响你？确定一个中心思想，并围绕它展开。 2. "选择合适的视角 (Choose the Right Perspective):" 你是以一个游客、一个即将离开的人、一个已经回来的人，还是一个土生土长的居民的视角来写？不同的视角会带来不同的感受和内容。 3. "细节描写 (Use Specific Details):" 不要只写“我的故乡很美”，要具体描述美在哪里。是清晨的薄雾？是奶奶做的饭菜香味？是儿时常去的小巷？运用感官（视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉）来描绘，让读者身临其境。 4. "个人情感 (Incorporate Personal Feelings):" “故乡”不仅仅是地点，更承载着情感。表达你对故乡的喜爱、思念、自豪或因变迁而产生的复杂感受。真诚的情感最能打动人。 5. "组织结构 (Organize the Structure):" 一个清晰的段落结构会让你的作文更易读。通常包括引言、

小学英语各类作文要点汇总，值得收藏！

小学英语作文要求

作文要求

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1.内容要点是否完整

2.语法结构是否正确

3.词汇运用是否准确

4.书写是否整洁（如书写较差，以致影响阅卷，分数将降低一个档次）

书写注意事项

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① 作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为"四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准写，不要把它作为第四线让字母吊在线上。

② 坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的感觉。一旦写错，规范修改，用一条斜线划掉错误单词即可。

小学英语作文分类指导

人物类 作文一 我自己Myself

要涉及的话题或句型：

—、姓名 My name is Wang Xiaoming./This is Wang Xiaoming.

注意名字有两个字时，要连在一起，只大写第一个字如王小明 Wang Xiaoming

二、年龄 I'm twelve./I’m twelve years old.

三、喜欢的食物水果与运动/功课等等

My favourite fruit/ food is …

I like playing badminton.

Because it’s good for my body.

四、经常在何时做运动或爱好

I often play badminton with my classmates after school.

五、家人

There are three people in my family:my father,mother and I.

六、家人职业及爱好（简略）

My father is an engineer.He likes reading books. He often asks me to go to the library with him.

七、结束语

I love my father. And Hove my family.This is me.

人物类作文二 我的朋友My friend

与Myself的区别：主语由I变He /She.动词由动词原形变为动词第三人称单数形式.代词由my变his /her

要涉及的话题或句型：开头句I have a friend.

—、姓名 His name is Wang Xiaoming./He's Wang xiaoming.注意名字有两个字时，要连在一起，只大写第一个字 如王小明 Wang Xiaoming.

二、年龄 He's twelve./He's twelve years old.

三、喜欢的食物水果与运动/功课等等

His favourite fruit food is......

He likes playing badminton.

Because it's good for his body.

四、经常在何时做运动或爱好

He often plays badminton with me after school.

五、家人

There are three people in his family:His father,mother and he.

六、家人职业及爱好（简略）

His father is an engineer.He likes reading books.

七、结束语

I like my friend.

人物类作文三 我的一天My day

时态 一般现在时

重要句型 主语+动词原形+其它.

在几点使用at...

I get up at 6:00.Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.

I eat breakfast at 7:00.Then I go to school.

I have seven classes every day.

Classes begin at 8:00.School is over at 4:30.

After school,I often play table tennis with my friends.

I eat dinner at 7:00.Then I listen to music.

I do my homework at 8:00.

I go to bed at 9:30.

This is my day.

人物类作文四 某人的一天Tom's day

时态 一般现在时

重要句型 主语(第三人称单词形式）+动词第三人称单词形式+其它.

注意与My day的区别

一、主语由I变为He.

二、形容词性物主代词由my变为his

三、动词由原形变为第三人称单数形式，简单记钇方法就是动词后加s或es

Tom gets up at 6:00.Then he washes his face and brushes his teeth.

He eats breakfast at 7:00.Then he goes to school.

He has seven classes every day.

Classes begin at 8:00.School is over at 4:30.

After school, he often plays table tennis with his friends.

He eats dinner at 7:00.Then he listens to music.

He does his homewoark at 8:00.

He goes to bed at 9:30.

This is Tom’s day.

时态类 作文五 下周末打算怎么过

时态 一般将来时

重要句型

主语+be+going to do sth.

主语+be+going to 地点

I am going to have a busy/happy weekend.

On Saturday moring.I’m going to.....

In the afternoon,...

In the evening,....

例文

Hi,this is Liu Yun.I’m going to have a busy weekend!On Staurday,I’m going to the bookstore by subway.I’m going to buy a new CD and some story-books.Then,I’m going to go home and read the new books.On Sunday,I’m going to the supermarket with my mother.We’re going after lunch.Then,in the evening,I’m going to visit my aunt.We are going to watch TV together.That will be fun!

空间类作文六 我的卧室My bedroom

时态 一般现在时

重要句型

There be + 介词词组

(on,next,to,behind,over,under等)

It’s.....

The...is on the...

注意主要物品是作为参照使用的。所以，我们一般先说bed,desk,table,之类的主要物品。然后再说其它物品与其的位罝关系。

I have my own room.

It’s small but nice.

Tliere is a bed,a desk,a closet and a shelf.

There are two end tables near the bed.

The computer is on the desk.

The books are on the shelf.

The trash bin is behind the door.

I like my bedroom.

空间类作文七 我的屋子

时态 一般现在时

重要句型

There be.....+介词词组

It's.......

主语+动词原形+介词词组

注意不同的房间功能是不一样的。所以我们可以说经常在哪个房间做哪些事情。

I live in a small house.

It’s a small green house.

In the house we have a dining room.two bedrooms,a living room and a kitchen.

We watch TV in the living room.

We have meals in the dining room.

We sleep in the bedroom.

We wash faces and have baths in the bathroom.

空间类

作文八 我的家乡 My hometown

时态 一般现在时

重要句型

There be....

主语+be+表语.

假设小鸟飞过时从天空上看到的主要情景，如果在农村的话，可以看到是山川河琉，蓝天白云。然后才是一些具体的情景。假如在城市的话，可能看到高楼大厦公路交通甚至工厂等。

I live in a small village.

It’s beautiful.The air is fresh.The water is clean.The counds are white.

There are many trees and flowers.There are many fish in the rivers.

I often go fishing with my parents on weekends.

I like my village/hometown.

动物类作文九 一只小狗

时态 一般现在时

注意： 由于主语是第三人称单数形式，因此，大部分句子构成是“主语+动词第三人称单数形式”

使用的主要结构还有It’s got....

主语+be+形容词

I have a pet dog.

It’s cute and naughty.

It’s my best friend.

It’s got a black nose and a long tail.

It’s got orange hair and big eyes.

It likes playing with balls.

I often take it out for a walk.

I like it very much!

信件类作文十 给笔友的信

1、注意邮件格式

2、自我介绍作文加信件格式.

时态 一般现在时 主语+动词原形

(注意：当写家人如父亲时，使用主语+动词第三人称单数形式）

重要句型

主语+be+表语

I like doing sth.

He likes doing sth.

例文

To: Alice @ penpal.com

From: Liu Yun @ penpal.com

Dear Alice,

I am happy to have a new pen pal. I live in China with my mom and dad. I don’t have a sisteir or brother.My mom is a singer.She likes swimming.My dad is a TV reporter.He likes listening to music.I like playing the violin and writing emails.

Your friend Liu Yun.

人教版九年英语四单元作文训练“今昔对比”

人教版九年英语第四单元是一个非常movtests 单元。适合以旧带新，巩固以前的of,。我利用最后一节作文课，和学生一起总结了一下的内容。用第一人称和第三人称描写人物今昔变化的作文。他们的困难是作文字数少，一般现在时第三人称动词三单易错，句式单一。我用词汇分类积累，句子扩写，边讲边练，写作模板设计等进行复习和训练。

一 Appearance.外貌

这一部分注意动词be和have/has 的使用。连词with和and的使用。

词汇积累：tall,of medium height,short,heavy,thin,slim,of medium build,
long/short/straight/curly/black/blonde/red/grey hair.

wear a pair of glasses/jeans/shoes/in+color,have/has a round face/a big nose,a small mouth,big eyes etc.

好句展示：

1 My sister has a round face with bright eyes and a small mouth.

2 He has brown hair and wears a pair of glasses.

3 He used yo be thin,but now how big and strong he is now!

最后设计一个本部分小测验，个别学生第四题出错。

1 My brother used to ___very short.

2 Annie used to_____ long straight black hair.

3 Jessica used to_____ jeans,but now she ____skirts.

4 He is used to _____glasses.

5 The boy who ______a red hat is my cousin.

6 The woman _____green is my teacher

7 He ____a big nose and a round face.

答案：1be,2have, 3 wear,wears,4wearing, 5wears,6in,8has

二Personality个性

这一部分注意单词积累。另外教学生学会扩展内容。用一两个句子来补充说明人物的性格。通过头脑风暴让学生复习以前学过的相关词汇，能够以旧带新。通过小组互评和自评能帮助学生更好的认识自己和他人。

词汇积累：outgoing, friendly,unfriendly,kind,popular,creative,confident,active,brave,smart,clever,stupid,foolish,silly,honest,humorous,hard-working,lazy,mean,dishonest,strict,serious，quiet,lonely,silent.

学生口头作文练习

WangRui is my best friend.He used to be really shy. He was always silent in class.He wasn't active at all. He dared not ask questions.But now, he has changed a lot. He becomes very outgoing.He takes an active part in many activities in our school.He has made many friends and he is very popular.WHat's more, he is very humorous.He often makes us laugh.

I am surprised at his big changes.Do you know why?

然后我又在教室巡视一圈，挑出几个同学的好句展示在黑板上。比如

1 My mother is so strict with me that she never let me ho out with my friends.

2 He is shy and quiet.It's not easy for him to make friends.

三 Hobbies 爱好

这部分要注意的是动词喜欢后面所加的可数名词复数，动词的ing形式。

我用What do you think of 家图片提示词询问他们对各种物品或活动的态度。同时复习以下内容。

like,prefer,love,hate,enjoy,be interested in,are fond of

球类棋牌类：soccer,football,baseball,volleyball,basketball,tennis,ping-pong,badminton,chess,cards,games.

乐器：piano,guitar,violin,drums,trumpet

其他：swim,run,dance,draw,sing,jog,read,watch movies.

四Environment环境

这一部分会写家乡的变化。房子，路，空气，交通等。注意训练学生审题，想办法用自己学过的语句表达看起来有点难的作文内容。比如

The traffic was not convenient in the past,but now there are all kinds of shared bikes,cars,taxes and buses aroud us.

下面是几篇范文，供大家参考。

一 英语书32页。How I've Changed!

My life has changed a lot in the past few years. I used to be heavy and unhealthy. But now, I am of medium build and very healthy. Because I started playing tennis three times a week two years ago.

The biggest change in my life was my English. In the past, I used to be afraid of English tests because I was weak in English.But now, I dare to give a speech in front my class. I can do better in my English exams. This is the most important change because my parents and my English teacher helped me.

二How she has changed!

Mary's life has changed lot in the last few years. She used to be very thin and short,but now she is strong and tall. She used to be shy and like being alone.She used to have little in common with my parents and others. Now, She is much more outgoing than before.She often hangs out with her friends on weekends. She is used to spending time with them and she's more popular at school than before.

The biggest change in her life was her

character.This is the most important

change because she has more friends now and she doesn't feel lonely anymore. She is happy about her changes.

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三.作文模板

My hometown has changed a lot in the last/past few years. In the past, the houses were very old and the rivers used to be dirty. There was so much litter in the river. People used to walk or ride bikes to work and they had no time for sports . However, things are different now. People live in tall and bright buildings. The river is so clean that many people can swim in it. People can drive their cars or take a bus to work and they spend more time doing exercise to keep healthy.Most people are richer and happier than they used to be.

I'm so happy to see the great changes in my hometown. I hope people will live a happier life.