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"掌握看图写作,让你的英语表达更生动"
看图写作(Picture Composition)是英语学习中一项重要的技能,它不仅考察学生的观察能力、想象力,更是对他们英语语言运用能力,特别是书面表达能力的综合检验。一张图片往往蕴含着丰富的信息、情感和故事,如何将这些视觉元素转化为流畅、准确、有内容的英文文字,需要掌握一些关键的注意事项。
"一、 仔细观察,捕捉关键信息 (Observe Carefully, Capture Key Information)"
这是看图写作的第一步,也是最关键的一步。不要匆忙下笔,而是要像侦探一样仔细审视图片。
1. "人物 (Characters):" 图片中有谁?他们的年龄、性别、外貌特征(如衣着、表情、姿态)是什么?他们在做什么?他们的情绪如何(快乐、悲伤、惊讶、愤怒等)? 2. "场景 (Setting):" 图片发生在什么地方(室内、室外、城市、乡村)?时间是什么时候(白天、夜晚、季节)?环境如何(整洁、混乱、美丽、破败)? 3. "物品 (Objects):" 图片中有哪些重要的物体或细节?这些物品有什么特别之处?它们可能与人物或事件有什么关系? 4. "动作与事件 (Actions & Events):" 图片中主要展示了什么动作?发生了什么事件?事件的起因、经过
如何用英语写看图叙事类作文
【写作任务】
假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。
注意:词数120左右。
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【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记来记述上周发生的一件事情,是一篇看图叙事作文。写作时,我们需要根据图片的先后顺序,通过合理的联想将画面的内容有条理、有层次地用文字表现出来。写作中要注意交代清楚记叙文的“六要素”,同时语言要具体生动、形象鲜明。在文章的结尾,还可适当发表议论或抒情。
通过审题可知,本篇习作应以第一和第三人称为主,且由于描述的内容已发生,故多用过去时态。
二、谋篇布局
本篇写作可分为三部分:
第一部分:点明主题;
第二部分:描写故事发生的过程,即四幅图片所展示的内容;
第三部分:总结全文,说明该活动对自己的影响。
其中,第二部分是本写作的重点。仔细观察每幅图画同时结合文字说明,我们可列出每幅图的表达要点:
图一:在学校的茶室里向外国学生介绍中国的茶文化;
图二:向外国学生演示如何沏茶,外国学生很感兴趣;
图三:外国学生亲自体验沏茶的乐趣;
图四:活动结束后,合影留念。
三、组织语言
第一部分:点明主题。
普通表达
..., a group of foreign students visited our school to learn more about ...
高级表达
..., a group of foreign students paid a visit to our school to gain a deep understanding of ...
第二部分:描写故事发生的过程。
普通表达
•I introduced ... All of them were quite interested in my introduction.
•I sat at a table and explained ... All of the foreign students were amazed and couldn’t wait to ...
•After watching my show, all the foreign students practiced and managed to make their own tea. Enjoying the delicious tea, everyone was happy and excited.
•In the end, we held cups in our hands and took a group photo to ...
高级表达
•I introduced ..., which aroused their great interest.
•I sat at a table, explaining ... Greatly amazed, they couldn’t wait to ...
•When their turn came, the tea room became lively with every foreign student trying to make their own tea. They had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea.
•In the end, we took a group photo, with cups in our hands, to ...
第三部分:说明该活动对自己的影响。
普通表达
The activity was ... We should organize more such activities to ...
高级表达
..., more such activities should be organized to ..
【范文展示】
Last week, a group of foreign students visited our school to learn more about our tea-drinking culture.
First, I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea to them in the tea room. All of them were quite interested in my introduction. Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table and explained every step. All of the foreign students were amazed and couldn’t wait to have a try themselves. After watching my show, all the foreign students practiced and managed to make their own tea. Enjoying the delicious tea, everyone was happy and excited. In the end, we held cups in our hands and took a group photo to record this unforgettable experience.
The activity was fun and meaningful. We should organize more such activities to introduce our culture!
Last week, a group of foreign students paid a visit to our school to gain a deep understanding of our tea-drinking culture.
First, I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea in the tea room, which aroused their great interest. Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step. Greatly amazed, they couldn’t wait to have a try themselves. When their turn came, the tea room became lively with every foreign student trying to make their own tea. They had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea. In the end, we took a group photo, with cups in our hands, to record this unforgettable experience.
Fun and meaningful, more such activities should be organized to introduce our culture.
【实战演练】
假设你是红星中学高一(1)班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。
注意:词数120左右。
提示词:地球日 Earth Day
Actions for a Greener Earth
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假定你校最近组织了一批志愿者到火车站提供服务。请以“Volunteer Activity at Railway Station”为题,给校刊的“英语园地”写一篇英文稿件。内容主要包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容:捡垃圾、信息咨询、帮助使用自助售票机(ticket vending machine)等;
3. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(题目已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Volunteer Activity at Railway Station
Last Sunday some volunteers from our school were organized to offer service at the railway station of our city. We were pided into small groups to undertake different tasks. As soon as we arrived at the station at 8:00 am, we got down to work. Some picked up rubbish on the ground and provided information for passengers. Some helped the passengers with heavy baggage. And the rest taught passenger show to use the ticket vending machine.
I learned a lot from the activity and felt happy when receiving grateful thanks. I believe that only by helping each other can we make our society a better place.
假定你是李华,在不久前的美国之行中得到了White夫妇的帮助。请你给他们写一封邮件,内容主要包括:
1. 简述他们对你的帮助;
2. 表达感激之情;
3. 他们来中国。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I'm writing to tell you that I've had a safe journey back to China and to thank you for your help.
It was my first time to go abroad so I was a bit nervous when I arrived in America. However, the first time I saw you at the airport, I knew from your warm smile that everything would be all right. With your help, I visited so many places of interest and had a better understanding of American culture. In addition, what impressed me most was your considerate care when I was ill, which made me feel at home.
I hope someday you will come to visit China and give me a chance to return your kindness.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,最近创作了一批以“福”字和“鲤鱼跳龙门”(Carps Jumping over the Dragon Gate)为主题的剪纸作品。请你用英语给开艺术品店的美国朋友Tom写封邮件,请他代卖。要点包括:
1. 剪纸艺术简介(中国传统艺术之一,植物、动物或故事均可成为剪纸的题材);
2. 你的作品内涵(“福”字象征好运;“鲤鱼跳龙门”代表勇气和成就);
3. 拟售价格。
注意
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
How are you? I wonder if you could sell some paper-cut works for me. As a traditional Chinese art, paper-cutting has a very long history, whose themes include nearly everything, such as plants, animals and stories. Here are the photos of two paper-cut works carefully made by me. One is the Chinese character Fu, which means good fortune or blessing. The other is named Carps Jumping over the Dragon Gate, which is a symbol of courage and accomplishment. People can use them either as gifts or to decorate their houses. They are only 15.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about paper-cutting, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华。自进入高三以来你妈妈不允许你使用智能手机,她认为这会影响学习和视力,而你认为智能手机能解决学习中的困惑且方便与同学交流。你们之间的冲突让你感到很苦恼。请你用英语给某英语报社编辑Mr.Advice写一封信寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Advice,
I am Li Hua, a Senior Three student. I have been troubled by a problem and have to ask you a favor with the hope that you will be kind enough to help me out.
My mother has not allowed me to use my smartphone since the beginning of the new term. In her opinion, smartphones will have a negative effect on my studies and eyesight. However, I don't agree with her. With the phone, I can easily find answers to some difficult questions. Meanwhile, I can share my worries and joys with my friends online, which can help to reduce my stress. What do you think I should do? I'd appreciate it if you can offer me some practical suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,想去英国做交换生,已写好申请信。给你的外教Mr.Brown写封邮件,请他帮你修改润色一下附件(attachment)中的申请信。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am sorry to disturb you, but I have to ask a favor of you. I'm pleased to know that a high school in Britain is looking for some exchange students from China. I have written an application letter, but I am not very confident about it. I'm worried that there may be some mistakes in language. I wonder if you could spare some time to help me correct the mistakes in the letter and polish it a bit. By the way, you can find it in the attachment. Thank you very much for your kind help again. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,在美国学习期间和寄宿家庭里的孩子Jack结下了深厚的友谊。在回国之际请你给他写一封信,要点如下:
1. 说明写信目的;
2. 回忆你们交往中难忘的事情;
3. 表达感谢与祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
How time flies! Having lived with you for half a year, I've developed a deep friendship with you. I'm writing to tell you how much I value our friendship and how unwilling I am to say goodbye to you. During the past months, you gave me lots of support. I can't forget the days when I was not able to handle culture shock. It was you that showed me how to adjust myself to the new living and learning environment, which helped me pull through the tough days with ease. Thank you for what you have done for me and may our friendship last forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是校报英语专栏的记者。请结合下图内容,以“Parents Are the First and Most Important Teachers”为题为校报写一篇稿件。内容包括:
1. 描述图画内容;
2. 分析图画所反映的社会问题;
3. 针对这个问题谈谈你的看法。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(标题已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:麻将mahjong
Parents Are the First and Most Important Teachers
From the picture we can see a boy is doing his homework while his parents are playing mahjong happily. The topic of the boy's homework is I love my family. However, looking at his parents, he is puzzled and doesn't know what to write about them.
The picture sets us thinking deeply. Parents expect much of their children, but on the other hand, some of them don’t bother to provide their children with a good learning environment. Neither can they make a good role model for their children.
Personally, parents are the first and most important teachers of their children. So parents should pay more attention to their behaviour and set a good example to their children.
假定你是李华,目前在新加坡做交换生。你在网上看到某动物救助中心(Animal Rescue Center)招募志愿者的广告,你有意加入。请用英语写一封申请信,内容主要包括:
1. 自我介绍;
2. 陈述自身的优势;
3. 希望获准。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am an exchange student from China. I've learned from the Internet that you are in need of some volunteers. I am writing to recommend myself.
I have the following advantages: First of all, I am fond of animals and my father is a biology teacher, so I have a good knowledge on how to take care of animals. Second, I don't have classes at weekends, which allows me to have a lot of spare time. More importantly, I have made up my mind to become a vet when I grow up. That is why I'd like to spend more time with animals.
Please give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom前几天发来电子邮件询问你暑假里的打算。但你因故未能及时回复。请给他写一封邮件,要点包括:
1. 未能及时回复邮件的原因;
2. 你假期的打算(打工、做志愿者等)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I am very sorry that I did not immediately reply to your email the other day. I have been occupied with various exams since last month. As for the upcoming summer vacation, I have made a careful plan to make full use of it. First, I will find a part-time job as a shopper's guide in a supermarket so that I can make some money and gain some social skills as well. Besides, I plan to volunteer in the children's house in my city because I want to help those unfortunate children. If time permits, I will take an online course to learn how to make short films.
Wish you a happy holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Bill最近将随父母来中国旅游,准备在你所在的城市停留两天。请你用英语给他写一封邮件,内容主要包括:
1. 表示热烈欢迎;
2. 提出游览建议;
3. 提醒注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bill,
I am very happy to know that you and your parents will stay in my city for two days. I have always been looking forward to your arrival. Since you will stay in Shandong Province, I suggest you climb the world-famous tourist attraction — Mount Tai, which has a long history, beautiful scenery and a wealth of cultural attractions. As the weather in the mountain varies greatly, it's wise to bring umbrellas or raincoats with you. Time permitting, I'd like to invite you to visit my family and I also plan to show you around my city. Wish you a safe and pleasant trip here.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,目前在伦敦某中学做交换生。你对该校网站上招募暑期夏令营志愿者的广告很感兴趣。请用英语写一封邮件询问相关情况:培训时间和地点、是否交纳培训费用、工作职责、住宿方式等。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I've learned from the Internet that some volunteers are needed at your summer camp. I am interested in the job opportunity and I am writing to find out more information about it.
First, I'd like to know when and where the volunteers will be trained and whether I have to pay for the training. Second, I am wondering what I am supposed to do for the campers as a volunteer. Third, how would you accommodate the volunteers? Would they stay in the hotel rooms or tents in the open air?
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,不久前在美国某购物网站购买了一台榨汁机(juicer),使用几天后机器出现故障。当地修理工声明无法维修并建议你与卖家联系。请你用英语给卖家写一封投诉邮件,要点包括:
1. 投诉内容;
2. 要求:换货或退款;
3. 内附收据(receipt)副本。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I wish to express my dissatisfaction with the juicer that I purchased from your online store on February 5, 2018. At first, it worked with a slight noise and two days later, it completely broke down.
In order to save time, I took it to a local repairman. However, the repairman said he could do nothing and suggested that I turn to you for help. I hope you can exchange it for a new one or give me my money back.
I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter and solve my problem. Enclosed is the copy of the receipt. And I am looking forward to hearing from you within a week.
Thank you.
Yourstruly,
Li Hua
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