手把手教你写《消费的英语作文》,（精选5篇）

更新日期:2025-07-23 18:26

写作核心提示：

写一篇关于消费的英语作文时，以下是一些需要注意的事项：
1. 主题明确：确保作文的主题是关于消费，可以从消费观念、消费行为、消费趋势等方面展开。
2. 结构清晰：一篇好的英语作文应该具备引言、正文和结论三个部分。引言部分简要介绍背景和主题；正文部分详细阐述观点和论据；结论部分总结全文，重申观点。
3. 语法正确：注意语法和拼写错误，确保句子结构完整，时态和语态使用准确。
4. 词汇丰富：运用丰富的词汇和多样的句式，使文章更具可读性。但要注意不要过度堆砌词汇，以免影响文章流畅度。
5. 论据充分：在正文中，要提供充分的论据来支持你的观点。可以引用数据、实例、名言等，增强说服力。
6. 观点明确：在文章中明确表达自己的观点，不要模棱两可。同时，注意尊重他人观点，进行客观分析。
7. 逻辑严密：文章中的观点和论据应具有逻辑性，使读者能够跟随你的思路。
8. 避免偏题：在写作过程中，要紧扣主题，避免跑题。
9. 文风恰当：根据文章主题和目的，选择合适的文风。如议论文应客观、严谨；记叙文应生动、具体。
10. 注意篇幅：控制文章篇幅，确保

书摘|金融女权主义：打破父权枷锁，掌控财富人生——消费

消费

1. 解读消费叙事

在本章开头，我们大量讨论了男性和女性在金钱方面所接受的不同教育。女性被灌输的信息是“停止消费，存钱”，而男性则被教导如何投资和积累财富。

在你的圈子里，你听到的关于金钱的叙事是什么样的？你是否感到有压力要存钱，不要“肆意挥霍”？

在阅读本章之前，你认为自己是“储蓄者”还是“花钱者”？“我们都是花钱者”这一观念是如何改变你对金钱的看法的？它是否帮助你将金钱视为一种工具，而不是邪恶或禁忌？

既然你已经阅读了对拉米特·塞西的采访，你的富裕生活是什么样的？请在下方想象一下，排除羞耻感和内疚感！将金钱视为一种工具如何帮助你打造你想要的生活？

2. 金钱日记

现在让我们开始探讨“好东西”——也就是理性消费和快乐购物的关键——你的金钱日记。

在完成你的金钱日记之前，先想想你的三大价值观是什么：

1. _________________________________________________________________

2. _________________________________________________________________

3. _________________________________________________________________

在接下来的四周里，你需要记录你所有的购物记录、购物原因以及购物感受。你可以在手机的备忘录应用、电子表格或笔记本中记录——你自己选择！

买什么/多少钱：（Madewell，70美元牛仔裤）

为什么：（现在的牛仔裤不合身，所以买一条新的！）

感受：☺

提醒：练习时不要评判。

两周后，回顾你的购物记录，并以下问题：

• 过去两周哪些方面做得不错？
• 你的消费习惯有哪些可以改进的地方？
• 列举三件值得购买的商品。
• 列举三件你觉得不再需要的商品。
• 过去两周，哪些购物让你感到快乐？
• 当你追踪了整个月的支出情况后，请以下问题：
• 这项练习最让你感到惊讶的是什么？
• 本月你最喜欢的购物是什么？为什么？最不喜欢的是什么？
• 在什么情况下，你的消费带有情绪化，无论是积极的还是消极的？是什么触发了你的购物行为？
• 你如何进一步优化你的支出，使其与你的理财目标保持一致？什么能让你感到快乐？
• 称赞一下自己本月做得“正确”的三件事。
• 你如何利用这项练习的发现来积极地影响你的理财？

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20篇初中英语作文 满分范文——涵盖初中英语所有常考话题

6.背景设定：最近，康明的加拿大朋友 Michael 给他发来电子邮件，想了解康明 家乡的变化。假如你是康明，请根据以下提示，给 Miachael 回一封电子邮件。

过去：生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便。

现在：生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及。

要求：1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述；

2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；

3.词数 80 词左右，开头语以给出（不计入词数）。

参考词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into,

communications(通讯)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Michael,

You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more

comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.

Sincerely Kang Ming

7.随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“ 网购” 成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

优点 1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。

2. 价格通常比较便宜。

3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。

缺点 1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。

2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。

注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含以上的所有方面； 2. 80 词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商 品 goods; 导致 cause

【优秀满分范文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

8.假如你是李华，今年上初三了，现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的 情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数：60-80。

【优秀满分范文】

I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.

I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.

I really miss my old days.

9. 某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为 How to keep a good relationship with parents 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；

2.你对这些问题的看法；

3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。

【优秀满分范文】

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.

10.今天是母亲节。假定你是李华， 请给你的美国笔友 John 写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：

1. 表述你与母亲间的情感；

2. 为母亲制作一张卡片；

3. 帮助母亲做点事；

4. 陪母亲散步等。

注意：1.词数 80 左右；

2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数.

【优秀满分范文】

Dear John,

It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?

I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.

Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.

What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours, Li Hua