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写作核心提示:
写一篇关于“My School”的英语作文,想要写得好,确实需要注意以下几个方面:
"1. 明确主题和内容 (Clarify Topic and Content):"
"核心内容:" 你的学校是哪里?它给你什么感觉?你最喜欢学校的哪些方面(比如建筑、设施、老师、同学、课程、活动等)?你在学校有什么难忘的经历? "构思提纲:" 在动笔前,先简单列个提纲,确保能涵盖几个关键点,让你的文章有条理。
"2. 确定文章结构 (Determine Article Structure):"
一篇典型的"My School"作文通常包括以下几个部分:
"开头段 (Introduction):" 简单介绍你的学校名称(如果方便且合适的话),或者直接点明你对学校的总体印象(e.g., "My school is a place where I learn and grow.")。 可以写学校的位置、规模等基本信息。 "中间段 (Body Paragraphs):" 这是文章的主体,可以写 2-3 段,重点介绍细节。 "选择重点:" 选择 2-3 个你最喜欢或最有特色的方面进行详细描述。例如: "描述校园环境:" 学校的外观怎么样?(美丽、现代化、有历史感等),校园里有什么?(花园、操场、图书馆、实验室等)。可以使用形容词来描绘(beautiful, modern,
I have a beautiful school.
我有一个很漂亮的学校。
There are many buildings in my school, such as teaching buildings, library, dormitory buildings and so on.
我们学校有很多楼,比如,教学楼,图书馆,宿舍楼等。
My classroom is bright, which can hold about sixty students.
我的教室光线很好,可以坐得了六十个学生。
Our library is very big. It has four floors and is full of books.
我们图书馆也好大,有四层楼而且都是装满书的。
In my spare time, I often read books in it.
在我空闲的时候,我经常在里面看书。
What’s more, the playground in my school is surrounded by various flowers and I like playing games with my friends on the playground.
而且我学校的操场环绕着各种各样的花,我喜欢在那里和我的朋友一起玩。
I love my school and I will study hard.
我喜欢我的学校,我会努力学习的。
Do you like it? Welcome to my school!
你喜不喜欢呢?欢迎参观我的学校!
昨天英语老师给孩子布置了一篇英语作文,孩子写起来费劲,不知道如何下手,写什么。
关于怎样让初一新生快速适应初中英语学习,写好一篇作文,我会在下一篇文章中讲解。
这次例举人教版英语第三单元的英文作文,介绍写作方法及范文。
首先,大部分文科类科目,都是离不开课文的。
我们不需要自己去苦思冥想新单词、新词汇,只需要书上的知识就行。
其次,学会把书本的单词、词汇、语法化为己用。
再次,是结合自身实际,进行一些变化。加上自己的个人感受或情感
最后,进行润色,利用一些高级词汇替代简单词汇,注意时态。
这是简单思路,具体可参考我之前的详细文章。
写的时候最好画出学校的平面图。
以下是介绍学校的范文,下面有讲解。
My New School
Hello! My name is Li Ming. I am a new student in Grade 7. This is my new school, and it is very large and beautiful. Let me show you around.
When you come into the school gate, you can see the library straight ahead. It is between the teaching building and the beautiful garden. The library is very quiet and has many interesting books. I love reading there after class. It makes me feel peaceful.
On the left of the library, there is our teaching building. All our classrooms are clean and bright. We have our English and other classes there every day. I feel happy and excited to study in this new building with my new classmates.
On the right of the library, there is a big playground. It is next to the dining hall. After school, we often play football and run there. It is my favorite place because it is always full of fun and laughter. It makes me feel energetic and free.
The dining hall is behind the playground. The food there is delicious and cheap. We often have lunch and chat with friends there. It is a very warm and busy place. I enjoy my lunchtime very much.
I love my new school very much. It is like a big and warm family. Everything here is new and wonderful to me. I am so happy to study and grow here with my new friends.
范文解析与模仿指南
核心句型 - There be 句型
· 原文示例:
"There is our teaching building." / "There is a big playground."
· 你可以这样模仿:
· There is a computer room on the third floor. (三楼有一个电脑室。)
· There are many trees and flowers in our school. (我们学校有许多树和花。)
核心词汇 - 方位介词
· 原文示例:
· on the left/right of... (在……的左边/右边)
· between... and... (在……和……之间)
· next to (紧挨着)
· behind (在……后面)
· 你可以补充的:
· in front of (在……前面)
- The flag is in front of the teaching building. (国旗在教学楼前面。)
· near (在……附近)
- The gym is near the playground. (体育馆在操场附近。)
核心词汇 - 建筑物名称
· 范文使用了:
library, teaching building, playground, dining hall, garden, school gate.
· 你可以补充的:
· gym (体育馆)
· computer room (电脑室)
· music room (音乐教室)
· office building (办公楼)
· lab / laboratory (实验室)
表达感受的句子
· 原文示例:
· "It makes me feel peaceful/happy/energetic."
· "It is my favorite place..."
· "I love... very much."
· "I am so happy to..."
· 你可以这样模仿:
· I think it's fantastic. (我认为它棒极了。)
· I feel proud to study here. (我为自己能在这里学习感到自豪。)
· It is a great place to relax. (它是一个放松的好地方。)
如何模仿这篇范文写你自己的学校?
你可以按照下面的步骤来写:
开头: 介绍你自己和新学校给你的整体印象。
· "Hello, I'm . I'm a Grade 7 student at Middle School. My school is ."
正文: 选择3-4个你学校里最重要的地方进行描述。
· 第一步 (说位置): 用方位词说出这个建筑在哪里。
"The... is behind/next to/in front of the..."
· 第二步 (描述它): 用1-2句话简单描述一下这个地方。
"It is ."
· 第三步 (谈感受): 说说你在这里做什么,或者你的感受。
"I often... there. It makes me feel..."
结尾: 总结一下你对学校的整体感情。
· "I really love my school. It is a wonderful place to learn and make friends."
现在,拿起笔,参考上面的句型和词汇,试着写一写你自己的学校吧!
参考范文一:
My New School
Hello! I'm a new student in Grade 7. My school is big and beautiful. Let me tell you something about it.
When you walk into the school, you can see the teaching building straight ahead. It is in the center of the school. Our classrooms are clean and bright. We have English classes there every day.
Behind the teaching building, there is a library. It is very quiet. I like to read books there after class. It makes me happy.
On the left of the teaching building, you can find the dining hall. The food there is delicious. We often have lunch and talk with our friends there. It is a warm and busy place.
On the right of the teaching building, there is a playground. It is very large. We play basketball and run there after school. It is my favorite place because it's full of fun and laughter.
I love my new school very much. It is like a big family. Everything here is new and interesting to me. I feel happy to study and grow here.
范文2
My School: A Place for Learning and Fun
Hello! Let me show you around my school. It's not too big, but it has everything we need and is full of happy memories.
As you walk through the main gate, you will see the teaching building straight ahead. It's a five-story white building where we have most of our classes. My classroom is on the third floor. Inside, there are big windows that let in plenty of sunlight. We have tidy desks, a blackboard, and colorful posters on the walls. There is also a "Book Corner" at the back where we can borrow books to read.
To the left of the teaching building is our playground. It's not very large, but it's always full of energy. We have a basketball court and a running track there. During breaks, you can see students playing basketball or just running around. My favorite memory is our last sports day, when we had a fun relay race. Everyone was cheering so loudly!
Behind the teaching building is our cafeteria. It's a one-story building with a red roof. The food there is simple but delicious. My friends and I love to eat there during lunch break, especially on Fridays when they serve fried rice – it's the best!
I really love my school. It's a wonderful place where we study, play, and grow up together.
(试试自己画一下重点的单词,常用的表达句吧)
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